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Thursday 15 May 2014

💣 war, lives, and loss



war is the definition of conflict
it starts of in a disagreement
then ends with a lot of pain inflicted
but why couldn't we come to an agreement ?
before this tragedy
before people started losing their family

the soldiers who put down their lives
and probably left their wives
the blood of many shedded
as they fought and protected
and for those who are killed

all war means is peace

2 comments:

  1. Thank you for sharing your poem Danielle, I like the way that you have used a rhetorical question for effect. "why couldn't we come to an agreement?"
    I'm not sure what you mean by "All war means is peace" in the last line. Can you elaborate for me?

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    1. By saying 'all war means is peace' i'm saying that they're finally at peace, since they don't have to fight in the war and suffer etc.

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