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Friday 2 November 2012

It's a MYSTERY

LI: To have onomatopoeia, similies and speech.



Crunch! crunch! crunch! As they walked over the dry autumn leaves.Ahhhhhh someone screamed out so loud that everyone looked at the area were the car was. "Wait where's the car gone?" shouted Tori. "It should be here" Blake answered standing in suspense. Emily and Zayn run over to Tori and Blake. "Look there's a cabin over there" Zayn shouted, now he a little bit more faith that they were going to get of there. "Someone might live there, but it does looks deserted but, still it might be our only" Tori said. Well im not going in there I'll wait out here were it's safe" said Emily. Emily waited and waited and waited but, they didn't come out it was like they just disappeared

To be Continued...

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