Torrential rain made the Grey River on the West Coast rise and it was so close to flooding Greymouth Town. But unfortunately lots of cows were killed because the powerlines down and the water mixed with the electricity and it electric shocked some of the cows. Good thing helicopters picked up about 100 cows and moved them to high ground.
You are starting to write interesting sentences and use descriptive vocabulary Danielle. That is the way to write interesting stories.
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